Angelic is her smile
devilish is her grin
but when it comes to choosing
who knows which one will win
sweet, sweet child
evil little witch
can't define the two
when will you flip her switch?
gentle,soft touches
painful, deep scratches
evil feelings arise
incinerating like matches
Good little girl
dark, decieving beauty
changing within seconds
wich one will the future see?
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Written August 5th, 2005
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awww, thank you! i appreciate that!
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I LIKE IT!! SO BEAUTIFUL. That pretty much all I can say to discribe such a magnificant poem. -
heh, well thanks im glad you liked it, im just sorry ur able to relate to it... take care! ~kiersten~
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WOW BEAUTIFUL!! I LOVE IT!!!! i am biepolor so see this kinda relates 2 me in a werid way
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thank you so much!
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thanks so much! well this poem is actually about me... sort of, i have been put on anit depressants again and it makes me really bi polar so the kind of dueling personalities represent me, when im going through mood swings. Thank you for your applause and the best of luck to you and your daughter! take care ~kiersten~
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wow. this is powerful and well written. Keep it up.
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wow, that is freaky. This part reminds me of my daughter:
" gentle,soft touches
painful, deep scratches
evil feelings arise
incinerating like matches"
I love her, but It can be so enraging when she flips her swich, like you put it. Wow, I am glad you wrote this. I am too afraid to write about the darker side of her. Who is your poem about?
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