I'm not here, trance like stare.
Not thinking,
not speaking,
not blinking.
Just a shell of the person
I am.
A body with no soul.
No feelings,
not knowing.
Not caring.
Showing no remorse for the
evil deed that has been
done.
The evil that lies within
has no name. It has no heart.
It knows no shame.
I don't hear your screaming.
I don't hear your pleading.
I smell your bleeding,
sencing your blood.
I am dead without a soul.
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Written August 5th, 2005
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Wow, very well done. I like...Thumbs up.
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i like this very much. you are a very good poet, keep it up. i know the feeling...
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nice write, this is a good poem...but leads to the question of 'whats wrong?' and 'whats happened?' but there we go..im here if you need to talk babe, otherwise this is a brill poem. l8az love ya sky xxxx
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very nice write...a few grammer errors, but other than that, you did a very nice job...keep up the good work.
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this is good a little different from what im use to reading, keep up the work, love you much
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hey this was awesome. I can feel the emotions and feelings you put into this, wow..I like it alot. It has nice rhyming too.
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