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Sleep Now

Skip along my dearest friend
To the fields of blue
Sing along my dearest friend
To this song so new...

Let the sunshine break upon you
And you wishes come true.
Let the night bring sweet dreams
And the day anew

Everyone so so full of glee
Show a smile down on me

Everything shiny and new
All rust has gone away

People these lies I feed
Are only to bring you joy

Never believe a word I say

Over this little game

Wave goodbye and say goodnight and remember I love you.

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Written August 5th, 2005

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  • xMorbidxPandax
    October 14, 2005
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    AH...I feel that I should live alone die alone....lol the loners creed...hehe


  • Hellsfinest
    October 13, 2005
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    Hey Flippy and Panda
    AKA Sheila and Amanda
    Don't forget we'll all go hand and hand
    To the depths of a 6-deep land.
    For thall if you pass from your life
    Let it be velvet rope, gun or knife
    I shall acompany on this ride
    To the place where everyone dies.
    Be it better burned in bad weather
    none of this matters because we'll die together.

    You go and I go!


  • BrokenOne
    September 6, 2005
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    super duper

    a pome filled with lies and deceit! just as the Gods intended!
    Well done!


  • xMorbidxPandax
    August 9, 2005
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    love you too sweetie

  • Flippydatree
    August 8, 2005
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    that was great amanda i will be your bestest friend for life if you dont die cuz you go i go

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