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me and you

there's so much in my head
i wish you could see,
i wish i could believe-
beautiful paintings of you and me.

i hope you see this is my best,
even though just begun.
but me and you-
we'll fill in the rest.

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Written August 5th, 2005

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  • thesilence
    August 6, 2005
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    haha sweet, is this about a something specific? hmmm? if so we must talk...hehe tyler and his college girls. how sweet. lol. get back to me. great write


  • August 5, 2005
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    this is krishell on emily's sn. that was a good poem. it's been a while since you posted something that i know of. anyways... keep up the good work...

    shellEy


  • tinuviel
    August 5, 2005
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    wow... it's amazing what can be said in only a few lines... that was absolutly beautiful... i would pick a favorite line, but they're all brilliant so... ... AMAZING write, you deserve more applauses for this than i can give you!