now i see that your arms are no longer open
i am waiting i am always will be your loves means the world to me
open your arms
and i will be there for you
i could be your everything
the wine that you drink
open your arms
i could be the one you see before you turn off the lights
lighting and thunder won't scare me down
i know i can't see but maybe I'll find you
the lights have been off for far to long
here i am with
open arms
a lonely in the dark
hoping you will find my open arms
Author notes
Written August 5th, 2005
A contest entry
- Gotta Love The 80's by Whispering Winds.
400 points, ended August 6, 2005, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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that was kick ass my friend good write be proud i hope you do well in the contest and thankx for the words on my poem
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Wonderful, Perfect
Wow! I really like this one as you have away with words along with a wonderful mind and keen eye for detail. Great write and I hope your poem wins
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Oh, i really like this...I can even hear the music to go with it. Excellent work. Thanks for entering my contest..and best of luck to you.
Tammy
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