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Echo of My Heart

Your shadow haunts my memories
You are beautiful and free
I give you my love
My trust and my soul
Those elusive eyes stir me strongly
With the emotions that you bring
You will forever and always be
The echo of my heart

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  • etoile
    December 12, 2008

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    i liked this, but for this contest i was looking for something a little longer. otherwise this was a nice poem. i liked all the imagery and i really liked the ending.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • DeepxSpirit
    August 7, 2005
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    Wow this is simply stated yet beautiful...the last line does serve to echo in the reader's mind.With the picture it brings it in as a diverse meaning...instead of just being a typical love poem.

    Kudos and Blessings,Tom


  • -diamond tears-
    August 5, 2005
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    beautiful thanks for entering both your poems into my contest!