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I can make you

I can make you...
              Smile, laugh,thank God your life is not like mine,cry,I can even make you feel bad for me, and better for you.

But why can't I see what you see.

I can make me...
            cry, feel a nonfeelin numbness inside,i can even make me go crazy.

I can sat in a white room with no one in it and see the others.

I can sat in a white room with you, ans may never even kniw that you are there.

Why do u teel me that I can grow on you, and why do u tell me that you are happy to see me, Do you really see me.......

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Written August 5th, 2005

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  • confusedgirl-ky05
    August 22, 2005
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    great write! make sure to check ur spelling keep the good work! check out my new poems


  • LoverstruckRaven
    August 5, 2005
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    Aww i can see you! and your such a great person even if you dont have the greatest life. I love you and always will and im always here if you need me! I love you hunny and miss you!
    Love ya,
    Tasha

  • goldflower
    August 5, 2005
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    i see u and ur big head! but its all good love u much
    ~Deirdre~