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The Missing Piece

a world of chaos
       - welcome to my world
there's something missing
 today
a feeling swirling in my
 system
   why do I feel so?

desperation breaths
 within me,
  a numbing sensation
like the sunset
  at dawn...

something will end
  something special
something important
  what am I missing today?

a broken piece of my heart
 a shattered dream
a quiet home
  a piece of my life
where did I lose myself?
 I want this turmoil to end...

     a searching soul quenched with thirst
           in the middle of the desert...


Author notes

Feeling a bit lost...had to get it out of my system.
Written August 4th, 2005

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  • transcendental baby gold member
    August 6, 2005
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    This struck too close to home Pi ... kind of felt that same thing a couple of days ago but today I had the opposite feeling ... so who knows what lerks in the hearts of men

  • JessAmerica
    August 5, 2005
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    I love tis flower. I can relate to the lost feeling. It's so hard to find the way back sometimes, huh? Makes me feel like no other person knows what I am feeling at that time. Then I read something like this and know I'm not alone. Makes me feel much better.


  • Imokon
    August 5, 2005
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    My poor bestest friend by desert pact feeling a little drought today? aww... hugs

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    August 4, 2005
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  • Thetwistedvagabond
    August 4, 2005
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    wow...i dont know what to say. But somehow I feel I can relate to this. just sometimes.

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