Everything may seem like its fine
But truthfully its all so wrong
Like nothing makes sense
Like she just doesn't belong.
Everything seems like a nightmare
That she wished she could dream away
But in honesty, this is reality
and its here to forever stay.
So she rest her head and go to sleep
And Listened to her final lullaby
Giving up seems all too sweet
When Nobody would care if you die.
Her lullaby is sad
It sings without a care
It sings of a life
That just isn't there
A life that was over
Before it had begun
A life that started out bad
A life never to be won
She slept to the sounds
Of that final lullaby
As her life slowly ended
All she could do was cry
Such a fate only left
To the desperate need to end
Instead of living life
All she could do was pretend...
Author notes
Wow its been ages since I've been on here. I'm quite serious.. ages. heh... well yeah, here ya' go ^^
Written August 4th, 2005
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Everybody has been in a situation that easier to play a role in then it to be yourself and have your feelings...I like this peice because it captures the essense of that feeling and captures the girl who is pretending to die....Good job and keep up the good work I appreciated reading it
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i think you ending was awesome. It definetly left me with an imapact.
To the desperate need to end
Instead of living life
All she could do was pretend...
i could relate to that part the most, actually understanding the emotional turbulance in her head!
beautiful stuff...keep it up!!


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