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Prayer

Throw it to the blue air
You'll never be the same
Unless one says a prayer
Passion's not to be aflame

So help me, God
Take away the pain
Why is everything so wrong?
Is there really true love’s bane?

Shoot the bullet
Free the doves
Could you really do it?
Ending all the “luvs”

Throw it to the blue air
You’ll never be the same
For lest you say a prayer
We’ll never be aflame

It’s all downhill from here
Never seen again
Wipe away a single tear
Passion in our love to wane

Pull the trigger
Scattered white
Hole in heart is getting bigger
Disappearance of “s’all right”

Throw it to the blue air
You’ll never be the same
For lest I say a prayer
We’ll never be aflame

Nothing’s ever right
Shoot only if you dare
In Mother’s eyes say a prayer to-night
Say a prayer

Throw it to the blue air
You’ll never be the same
For lest we say a prayer
Love’s not to be aflame

Throw it to the night air
I’ve lost knowledge of your name
And if I say a prayer
Nothing will ever be the same

Author notes

...PWEEEEZEEE.... LEAVE COMMENT.... OR I CWY!! T-T
Written August 4th, 2005

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  • Lil Wolfie
    August 4, 2005
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    ...Wow... awesome. I love your poems/songs, lass. They totally rock! You've got some major talent. You're gunna be one helluva novelist some day, mate! Great write!