So long since I've felt
the flutter, this chill down my
spine, my body and soul ache for you
forbidden one.
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Written August 4th, 2005
forbidden love
A contest entry
- Forbidden Love by Ignis Corpus.
425 points, ended July 17, 2007, 36 entries
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It seems better when ya can't have it..
I guess that's why we want it, simply put..
Sad really, but oh so true...
Thanks for sharing.. Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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good poem but a little short you need to add just a few more lines good luck in the contest
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this was truely great! it has emotion and it has that feeling of wanting somethink that you can not have. well done and keep up the good work
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Love your wording,very descriptive,keep up the good work...Mom
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i really liked this,short poems,are usually so much easier to understand,and the emotion is just as same as it would be in a longer one.but anyway great write.xXLauraXx
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You make us feel that tingle good job
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I LOVE THIS. MOST SHORT POEMS JUST LEAVE ME WITH SOMETHING MORE TO BE DESIRED BUT YOURS IS SO COMPLETE YET SIMPLE! GREAT WRITE.
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love.
I love this poem. I've always been a fan of short poems. they're so to the point but at the same time still leave you with some form of questioning and want for more. I love your word choice and your ability to take some thing such a forbidden love and make it felt by the reader in such few words. Your choice for line breaks is also admired. by putting certain words on there own line they have more of an effect. Keep writting. & be sure and read my poems as well. J.
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