I think I've fallen
This love is impossible
A forbidden fruit
Author notes
Written August 4th, 2005
forbidden love
A contest entry
- Forbidden Love by Ignis Corpus.
425 points, ended July 17, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Infinituple Haiku by Pollycheck.
600 points, ended April 10, 2008, 100 entries
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Thank you entering my haiku contest.
I think I've fallen
This love is impossible
A forbidden fruit
This is well written well, but it is a collection of three statements rahter than the sense images of a haiku. -
Ah, the forbidden fruit.. yepp, bad..lol..
Thanks for sharing, and you're a trip.
Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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this is a good poem, but like i said to someone else it is a little short i will accept 15 lines even though i asked for 25. good luck in the contest
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This is short and keeps your ideas on edge and asking why is this love impossible,I like it,good work...Mom
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10/10
it was a good haiku. as if you falling in love is supposed to be forbidden and you have fallen in love. i could almost feel a bit of fear in the haiku, as if something bad is going to happen, no mattter, it is good. Suteki! -
thank your for stopping by to read my work
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This was really good..short and gets to the point, keep it up
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