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Orenji no Taiyou

The rising of the dawn
That illuminant orange glow
Both about to cry
A final good-bye
Locked in an embrace
I refuse to leave your side
It’s for the good of us both
Escaping the love
Not a single sob
“Go.”
The tears keep running down your face
And mine
“The dawning of the sun
That illuminant orange glow
The final… last good-bye
Both about to cry
Under the illuminant orange glow”
It’s over; both has shed their tears
Love
Under the illuminant orange glow

Author notes

...REVIIIIIEEEEEWWWWW.....!!!!!!!! U.U
Written August 4th, 2005

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