When the very last wave recedes from the shore
what will count
is how much we love the Lord.
Author notes
"And now these three remain: faith, hope and love. But the greatest of these is love." 1 Corinthians 13:13
This is a pixiku.
fyi..in case you are wondering, a pixiku is a new form created by
Sea Angel....
"A short original personal quote (thought) of wisdom, humor, knowledge, moral, life experience or beauty etc. that YOU thought of set up any way you want to in THREE lines.
P ixiku is a short original personal quote (thought)
I nvented by me: SEA April 21, 2005
X eno to poetry and the wild child of Haiku and Senryu
I nvites your wisdom, humor, life experience, beauty etc.
K eeping a syllable count or lower case not required in three lines
U p to you how you set up to best express your message."
This won the bronze trophy in Sea Ange's "Another Pixiku" contest 8/7/05.
Graphic from members.aol.com/rbo3315791/images/bodieislandlight.jpg
Written August 3rd, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Woo Hoo! Another Pixiku Contest... by SEA angel.
300 points, ended August 8, 2005, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this is nice and gentle to the eyes to read and absorb
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Congratulations on your win.
--Jocelyn -
Very well done!
Wow! This is a beautiful Spiritual pixiku. Love and Faith in Almighty God, the Creator of All, is of utmost importance and the foundation block upon which our entire life and beyond is dependent. I like the thought very much, the picture as well as the background in which it has been set. Heartiest Congratulations on the Bronze!
Charishma -
Thank you so very much for the bronze. I am so homored. God bless you! - joanne
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This is wonderful and so very true. No matter what we collect in life nothing will matter excpet our love in the Lord. That is the only thing we can take with us. This was a wonderful reminder of that.
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Yes, so true. We think so many things matter, and He spends so much time showing us that all that matters is Him. Beautifully put.
Isn't it wonderful, though, that this one thing that matters most is already there for us... we love Him because of His love for us... as long as His love is there, all we have to do get to know it. How simple!
Lovely thoughts here. Best of luck for a prize.
--Jocelyn -
Very nicely penned my friend and true ♥ ((hugs))
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Excellent
WOW! This is excellent and could be in a religious inspirational card of Hallmark card quality. Excellent spiritual Pixiku. Thanks for entering and I'm glad you got a copyright of this GREAT thought of yours. -
good stuff
good write,its short,simple and very true. -
Great one, much enojyed, and a nice picture to fit the text aswel!
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Joanne, wonderful sentiments expressed so purely. Nice!!!!!
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excellent
Beautiful write Joanne!!!!
So few words with so much meaning. Where we are in our walk when the time comes. I really love this one and hope people get the message. So important as to where our Love of God is in our hearts. Praise God!!!! BRAVO -
Couldn't have said it better myself. Your uplifting poem is a tribute to your own personal testimony! Thanks for sharing!!!
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it has a very strong message to it, although i found it a little discouraging, like no matter what we do or achive or become, faith, which is one of life's most difficult aspects, will be all that matters.
hmmmmmm....
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