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Been A While

I'm done and gone.
Years ago I was fine.
I thought the creature was gone.
He returns for me and the dark.
The dark fills and the light is gone.
My faith has almost run dry.

 I'm done and gone.
Your faith lasted for so long.
Now my own diminishes.
Now I wonder if it was worth is.
Worth the smiles and kind words.
They think I'm fine.
Darkness still overtakes me.

 I'm done and gone.
I'm this dark soul fighting for the light.
Lately I'm fine, but its takes over.
Sometimes it's all I have.
When I'm "fine", am I fine?
Do you see the pain.
The darkness that controlls my tongue?
 
 It's been a while, but do you remember
the way you made me smile?
 It's been a while, but do you remember
the words I spoke, soft and kind?
 It's been a while, but I miss you.

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To an old love.
Written August 3rd, 2005

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  • Seven Kinky
    August 8, 2006
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    *Sighs* So touching, but so sad. Scary what old loves can bring up in our darkest moments, ne? Nicely done, my dear. Hope all is well with you.


  • stolen fairy
    August 4, 2005
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    sometimes the memories just never fade... nice write darls.
    ~tara