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Magical Irish coffee

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Come have a cup of Irish coffee
well top of the morning to you
made with magical coffee beans
the leprechauns mix up this brew

The wee ones are hidden away
they live in the forest so deep
all day long just brewing coffee
getting stronger letting it steep

To find them is not very easy
you must follow any rainbow
there for only a brief moment
quick into the Forrest you must go

Following the meandering stream
till it comes to a sharp bend
a  mile left then a mile right
brings you to the rainbow end

There you shall find such treasure
no, there is no gold in the pot
it is filled with a magical brew
Irish coffee that is piping hot

The wee ones welcome you
please come and sit awhile
relax with a cup of coffee
you have journeyed many a mile

They say drink up and enjoy
the coffee is a magical brew
for it only takes one little sip
you'll become a leprechaun too.

So better beware of Irish coffee
unless you don't mind being small
if you believe, I've another tale
Irish whiskey makes you grow tall
 

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Written August 3rd, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    March 4, 2006
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    WONDERFUL CONTEST

    Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem.I so appreciate it. Great contest with great entries. Take care, Sandy

  • intanglio2ring
    March 3, 2006
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    Enjoyable poem - like your irish coffee - love it!!

  • astralshepherd gold member
    March 3, 2006
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    Thank you so much for this wonderfully entertaining poem. I wish you good luck in the contest. Blessings and best wishes, ~richard

  • Sandygram silver member
    November 10, 2005
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I so appreciate it. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Take care Grandmom.
    Edited on Nov 10, 5:02 because ''.

  • Autumn Whisper
    November 9, 2005
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    Wicked poem grandma, I loved it, and such a cute picture too, I also liked the part at the end, with the whisky, nice one
    keep up the marvellous work
    best wishes as always
    grandson

  • Symphony
    August 16, 2005
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    Aw this was cute.
  • Whiplash
    August 13, 2005
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    Go hiontach!

    Brilliant!I love the pic you used and the poem itself is just wonderful. The flow is spot on and the story is great. I like Irish Coffee!!!

  • Anly Stede
    August 4, 2005
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    thats one of the things i really like about your poetry, Sandy... it makes a heart light, you know sweet and definitely endearing... made me smile as you know how hope you are well xx

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 4, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you Barbara. I appreciate your wonderful comment. I am so glad you enjoyed it. God Bless and take care, Sandy AP Mom

    Edited on Aug 04, 7:54 because ''.

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 4, 2005
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    Thank you sis for the wonderful comment. This was a fun poem to write. Take care,hope all is fine there. Love, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 4, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you Michael. I always love your comments. Hope all is well. Take care and God Bless you. Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 4, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you Don for the great comment as always. It is much appreciated. God Bless, Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 4, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you pozo for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy
  • pozo
    August 4, 2005
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    Magical write with a touch of Ireland about it Thanks for your comment on my poem, I've been ok
    This is a really beautiful piece, good luck in the contest
    All the best,
    Pozo

  • Donjo1030
    August 4, 2005
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    excellent

    Very unique write!!!
    Wonderful flow and rhyme you penned in this poem. Very humorous write on the old leprechaun tale. the last stanza worked really well to close. BRAVO!!!!!!

  • Arsenic-
    August 4, 2005
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    Oh Sandaygram, that was so cute! LOL, very clever, I really liked the last stanza. Arsenic-
  • Arcomage
    August 3, 2005
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    awesome absolutly "bloody" awesome. How's mi Irish?
    thanks for sharing, and thanks for being so cleaver

  • Painted Poet
    August 3, 2005
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    oh yeah.. i forgot to say.. love the pic you selected for this poem... Peace & Harmony

  • Painted Poet
    August 3, 2005
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    LOL>> How very cute was that... i loved it.. as do i LOVE coffee. my favorite part..

    So better beware of Irish coffee
    unless you don't mind being small
    if you believe, I've another tale
    Irish whiskey makes you grow tall.
    very Creative ... enjoyed reading it... Painted.

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 3, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed. It was fun to write. It's good to get out of the serious mode for a while. Again thanks for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy

  • August 3, 2005
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    refreshingly pleasant - and with coffee no less!! this had a good flow to it and was fun to read! thanks for sharing

  • Tattered Dignity
    August 3, 2005
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    Nicely done...this made me smile.

  • sadsexymama
    August 3, 2005
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    :)

    i loved it great job

  • Chilko
    August 3, 2005
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    This is an awesome poem. I had to read it as soon as I saw the title. It's a unique and cute little rhyme what can I say??? If it's the coffee that makes ye grow short, then my family must have indulged in the Irish Whiskey many a time, lol. Good stuff, Muchas amor, Amanda
  • Linda Sue silver member
    August 3, 2005
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    4 Shamrocks! * * * *

    Tis a darlin' poem. And that's no blarney. May the Luck of the Irish be with ye in the contest. Love, Linny

  • UndyingLazarus
    August 3, 2005
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    Very original

    Very unique take on the leprechaun myth, very funny ending as well. It's a bit long but very engaging. Sometimes I feel the rhyme is being forced as opposed to flowing naturally, but most of the time it does flow. Thanks for the read.

  • Your Hine Us
    August 3, 2005
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    Very cute and I think I want to be tall,haha,but I do like coffee two cup's a day,nice poem very nice .
  • ecrivain01 silver member
    August 3, 2005
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    Clever and cute. What more could anybody want?
  • Ruckus
    August 3, 2005
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    ITS A NICE POEM NOT SOMETHING I WOULD NORMALY READ, BUT PLEASE DON'T GET MAD AT WHAT I SAY FOR I AM NOT A POET OTHERS MIGHT SAY ITS THE GREATEST

  • Flo Varekai
    August 3, 2005
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    I LOVE this poem! Wonderful and creative! The ending made me laugh. This poem has hit home with me. Yesturday I saw a rainbow and followed it, and only found myself gazing into a puddle of water. Perhaps I'm a little leprechaun? Anyway. Great poem. Blessings to you. Gott Mit Uns.
    ~Flo Varekai~
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