So cut me open and watch my eyes drown in the blood.
Look around and know me from the inside out.
Tell me how I think tell me what I should know.
Tell me you love me.
Hange me on your wall...
hange me up high....
hange by your cross hange me out to dry...
hange by your rope, the one you tied around your neck.
Hange me up to the sky and watch me as I die.
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Written August 3rd, 2005
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an excellent write here! this was dripping with raw emotion... a brutal wake up to reality in a sence!!! keep this up!
I expecially liked the lines:
Look around and know me from the inside out.
Tell me how I think tell me what I should know.
Tell me you love me.
This was very creative!!!
Keep up the excellent write!!!
~Melpomene~
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heh, thx for pointing that one out!
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Good
It like but the first line you put my and I think you meant me it this pisses you off I understand lol I HATE it when people do that to me but anywho good luck in all your writes and all you do this poem was very well done
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