strolling through the woods
my sight falls upon
a mystical door
a door that beckoned me
I saw glitter
from a distance
curiosity engulfed
me -
thirst grew from within
A step taken
perched upon a rock
I look up to the sky
a galaxy -
seen by my naked eyes
so serene so peaceful
quiet yet speaking to me
breath-taking wonders
I was surrounded by...
divinity lingered around
an Insight of
- an array of mixed fantasies
Author notes
It would be nice to see reality through the eyes of fantasy once in a while.
Written August 3rd, 2005
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A contest entry
- Contest: Doorway To The Stars by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended August 7, 2005, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love it on a clear night when you look out and all of a sudden just for that moment in time your caught between the beauty in it. You captured that feeling well.
Good luck -
This one needs a fuller format ... more exposition ... amazing imagery that you have the power to use more fully, dear Pi ... play with it
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Wonderful imagery here. Very whimisical, you can feel the fantasia of the mind peeking out and carrying you away. An excellent piece of work. Blessings, Gypsy
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excellent~
A mystical door to the heaven's and stars
This is so vivid and full of imagery
Also nice to meet you I entered too do hope you come read mine as well
Hugs
Susan~~~
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