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Another Day

Another Day

Today is another day,
another day without a cure.
I'd like it no other way,
today I met my future.

© Jim T. Henriksen
August 3rd, 2005

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Somebody asked me if I can make a poem "on command", and this was the result...
Written August 3rd, 2005

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  • Starhiker
    January 26, 2006
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    Hi, Bekah! Thanks for the comment!! Jim


  • metrophobiac
    January 26, 2006
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    You said it all in those brief lines....claro que si, well said. Nothing more to be added. Glad I read this.


  • Starhiker
    August 3, 2005
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    Thanks fot the comments, Buffy. KISS - Keep It Short, Sweety.


  • Starhiker
    August 3, 2005
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    Thanks Ellie. I don't believe in using too many words, if it can be said in a few...

  • buffytheparrotslaye
    August 3, 2005
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    !Clever!

    Wow! This is powerful for a short write you expressed a lifetime of emotion and feeling.Very clever.It is amazing how much can be really spoken in just a few fantastic words!


  • DRUNKENxXxBABiiD0LL
    August 3, 2005
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    that's pretty good. i liked it it was short yes but any longer and it wouldn't have made sense probably. great job!
    ♥ellie

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