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i am at peace

i just can't find the right words to say
even when it was time to walk away
my heart has been taken to the depths of hell
and there have even been times when my heart would swell
till i thought i was gonna burst in to tears
i cast out all my fears
just to spend one night in your eyes
this is the one dream i have before my heart dies
i have been struck before with a fatal blow
it was one i could recover from, but no one could know
just how bad it took its toll
on my beaten and broken soul
i have climb from the seventh circle of hell to see them eyes one last time
i beat the system through flawless design
is this what life is like when you have archive your goal
when you have realigned your soul
i am back on track
after i suffered such a lovers hate of heart attack
i was lost in this world like a leaf with a tree
but now i am back to the same old me
i can hide from the pendulum of doom once more
i have arisen like a Phoenix to settle my score
i have made inner peace with the demons i once called apathy
but now i have to see what truly is sympathy
i got to run to get away
but in this home i can no longer stay
i am at peace

Author notes

well here it goes kids i got my shit together and all that, i am once in my life happy imgaine that one, i left home bc i got kicked out and now i am staying with my best friend. good times and i found a really nice girl and the thing is i didnt move to fast so i am stil single
Written August 3rd, 2005

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  • fathom me
    August 7, 2005
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    ... and a tear is waiting to slip off the corners.. one more step, in one more poem, and my eeow mushy senti side will be all charged up!
    .. happy for ya