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All that is left

Locked away
Shoved down deep
All emotions
Fading away
Becoming nothing
Leaving emptiness
Falling thru
To the darkness
Engulfed by
Shadowy figures
Scratching,
Clawing
At nonfeeling flesh
Pain is
No more
I am numb
I am but
A shell of
What once was
Of what
Can no longer be
For life
Has been cruel
One too many times
This heart
Now shattered
And this soul
Now torn
All beyond repair
Simply searching
For an escape
Death being
All that is left

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Written August 2nd, 2005

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  • Malabu
    August 9, 2005
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    oh this is wonderful but don't look to death.....envision it and let yourself be reborn....this is a wonderful expression of the taunting pain felt in the soul of ones heart.....You have a some talent poet'ess I like this very much.....


  • Crystal Ellens
    August 8, 2005
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    very sad, I have been there before. you wrote this very well great job,excellent piece i love the way you expressed yourself in this very well done... ***Crystal***


  • Sunkissedrose
    August 3, 2005
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    You always could express yourself so much better than some of us. Even the sad emotions you do well. Keep it up, and I look forward to more poems by you.
    ~Carrie

  • Fire-and-Ice
    August 2, 2005
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    very well written , sad though, but i can relate, u have expressed urself so well, i can feel the raw energy

    ~Shawna~