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Friend

When you are having trouble
Good friends are needed most
And I for one am lucky
To my friends I raise a toast

You know me not
Still, you took interest in my plight
The kind words and prayers offered
Helped get me through each night

I offer humble thank you
Though faceless you may be
You can be nothing less than beautiful
You are reflected in the words I see

Author notes

I know this is very simple, but if you have read anything else I have written you know I am simple minded. I just felt the need to say thank you.
Written August 2nd, 2005

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  • LaPoet
    August 9, 2005
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    Amen for friends. They will sometimes help you through that which those you count on will not. Be proud you have friends and they care enough to help.

  • Dyingsoul
    August 3, 2005
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    100% F-Ing AwesomE!!

    WoW!!!this was totally awesome...i wish i could write this good.lol...i cant thou....lol
    ~JinxlynN~

  • Spartacus
    August 3, 2005
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    Sometimes simple is the best thing. After all, just a simple thank you can mean so much more. I think you've done that here. These people sound like true friends, and they should feel blessed to know that they have one in you.


  • pattyann4500
    August 3, 2005
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    Good and loyal friends are worth far more than earthly treasures. You mean a great deal to many people, and I am pleased to know that I am one of those people. Hugs and prayers, Patricia

  • Harland
    August 3, 2005
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    This is a very nice thing to do for your friends here. I know I haven't done anything to help you but I hope you feel like you can call on me if you need to.

  • yellowjacket04
    August 2, 2005
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    You done a wonderful job on writing this. You let your thoughts and feelings flow from your heart-- I like that. Also, I like the length of the piece-- it is short and right to the point.


  • Bellafreespirit
    August 2, 2005
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    A beautiful short poem, very simple and right to the point. Friendships made on the internet can very special, especially here on this site as we express our deep dark thoughts. Friendships are a wonderful thing. well written


  • dolphin goddess
    August 2, 2005
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    I think this is very nice. You got your point across, as you said, simply, but clearly and in a way that lets people know you're sincere.

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