The Things That You Do...
The Things That You Do That Make Me Smile
The Things That You Do That Make Me Vile
Your Actions Reflect Upon Me
I Love You So Much Cant You See
Why At Times Do You Want To See My Pain
And Other Times My Pain Is Your Hearts Drain
I Cant Seem To Let You Go
Because I Love You So
Why Don't You Just End This
Not With A Hug Or Kiss
Simply Say GoodBye
I Won't Shed A Tear I Will Not Cry
I Know Its For The Best
Lets Put Your Love To The Test
Baby I Love You And GoodBye
Author notes
Hey Everyone This Poem Was to my Boyfriend when we were split up..its not very good but i tried..
Written August 2nd, 2005
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wow britt this is really good! i know how you feel! guys are jerks!!! but what can ya do! love you!! xoxox
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thats really good!!!!!!!!
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Awsome!
Hye! thanks for the comment on my poem "the diff about our love" i really love this poem.. i see where your comeing from about the lines "Why Don't You Just End This
Not With A Hug Or Kiss" yeah thats so flipin true!!! but anyways wonderful poem you got here! Keep it up chickdy!
ttul
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=( I about cried...I can relate to this in so many ways. Beautiful.
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Awww... it's so sad.. I love it. I can relate to this majorly. Great job!!! Take care!
Sarah -
Hey Everyone Thanks For Taking Your Time To Read My Poems They Aren't Very Good But I try..
Brittany
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