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Before Autumn rises into all her intended glory,
the sun of the Gemini will force his deadly serpent down into the virgin's eyes
blinding her for vulnerability

Author notes

A little Jim Morrison inspiration hehe
Written August 2nd, 2005

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  • PoetXLoveXTragedy
    August 5, 2005
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    heh... interesting... lol thats all I can really say. love yah though!