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Sometimes...

Sometimes i wanna scream,
Sometimes i wanna dream,
Sometimes i wanna stay,
Sometimes i wanna run away,
Sometimes i feel blue,
Sometimes i think that
I Love You...
♥♥♥

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hi!
this poem was made because it's true!!!
hope you like it!!!
  Adi Woodpecka

Written August 2nd, 2005

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  • St-Rebel
    June 21, 2006
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    i like this poem.. It's short..I like short poems!!..lol..i was reading through m comment thing and saw you asked me to read some of ur work so... im using 3 of my free applauds on 3 of ur poems!!!* i would use 4 but i commented on somthin else..i wonder wat it was*
    Edited on Jun 21, 2:57 p.m. because 'who knows'.

  • Alice In Wonderland
    March 21, 2006
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    wow

    I'm talking to you on the telephone as I type this and you just yelled 'Ow!' for no reason. lol.
    Anyways, this is a really pretty poem, and I really like it. Hope that you find your password and manage to get on allpoetry.com so that you can keep writing and I can still read your awesome poems.
    Love ya,
    @|ice

  • Choc O late
    August 12, 2005
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    wow good
    LE likes it hope to see you at the end of August when Em comes


  • Manic Poet
    August 2, 2005
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    AWSOME!

    AWE! I love this poem! You are soo talented!
    I hope to read more poetry from you!


  • senza
    August 2, 2005
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    True??? oooh... dee... lol. Heehee. Nice one, liked the rhymes, and always the romantic touch at the end. DEEDEE!

    Where have u been

    Lady anairO

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