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If pinpricks and

If pinbunnys and
red crust could
cover my tear-cup--
Then I wouldn't desire such slashes:
plaid skin.
Yet bruises and hair-clogged sinks
Don't dare hide what
we all know.

A girl who plays with paper dolls
Never screams
or
crawls outside her pink mirror:
so I'll pull on my sweater--
And play the world once more.

Author notes

ugh! edit it! please!
Written August 1st, 2005

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  • August 4, 2005
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    WOOT

    Hey Melinda it be I Rocky. I would love to edit your poem but seeing as how I am horrible at it I shall not. I like it thought. Pinbunnys hehe. Well I am off!