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saying good bye to you

at last...
it's over...
no more you...
no more me...
we said good bye...
at last.

finally...
we ended...
no more we...
no more us...
we said good bye...
at last.

at last...
your gone...
no longer here...
i've let you go...
saying good bye...
to you.

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Written August 1st, 2005

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  • FlirtingWithSuicide
    April 5, 2006
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    This is short but right to the point and I like it a lot and this is amazing! Well written and I will come back to check some more writes soon!


  • So-Alone
    August 25, 2005
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    i love this so strong gr8t job on it! hey can u do me a fav.? read my friends new poem his name is mysticshrooms! he is gr8t and comment if u like it and tell people about it please he asked me to but its hard to do it all by my self! please! and check mine please if u want!
    !!nicki ~~~ thanks


  • Sonja
    August 2, 2005
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    Nice touchin poem full of feelings. Unfotunately this is a picture from your life. all of as had to said good bye...The easiest way is to suffer, and to say do not do that. I know...
    Follow your dream and you will find your love. Soon...Maybe that will be something real?