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What Should I Do Now?

You say you need your time and space so I give it to you,
You say you want to split for three weeks so we do,
But it wasn't what I wanted honestly,
And being pregnant right now makes this harder on me.

Some friends say I should leave you,
But I do want to stay,
What they say makes sense and your reasonings don't,
I fear I've lost you since they say you just want someone around,
Because in the end I don't know if you'll stay with me.

You have been tearing me apart seemingly not caring,
And after thinking it through I am getting sick of it,
So I think I may leave and start a new life,
Raise our child on my own and move to Jersey a while.

I thought you loved me and it doesn't seem that way anymore,
So when you ask me for an answer if I will stay I don't know what I'll say,
So think hard if you still want me,
If not then what will be will be.

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Written August 1st, 2005

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  • a u r a
    September 11, 2005
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    Sweets with something so important and beautiful happening within you in your life-you only deserve the best and every bit of happiness which is all yours-dont let anyone play games with you at any point of your life and especially not at this time-if he doesnt seem dependable and the kind that would be by yourside throught thick and thin ,then you must go ahead and take the right firm decision and the sooner taken the better-you seem to have some very caring pals that stand out to be a good support system to you-no point dragging on a dead relationship- the faster you wake up to reality and collect your self-Dear of course this is all my point of view only-just felt very concerned after reading this poem and again am assuming this is about you-if I have overstepped please excuse me I only mean well


  • AtVaR
    August 12, 2005
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    Im here for you too... This would explain why you havent been on for a while...


  • MaliceInWonderland
    August 4, 2005
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    fuck you, Cody.

    Go you, sweetheart, don't let him tear you down, me, Beth, Sam, William and all them got your back*squeezes*