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Don't Let Go

Hold on to me until
I just can't breath.

Make Love to me from
the inside out.

Don't Let Go of me
Tonight.

Let's make this night
so special, that we
will hold on to the
memories forever.

Make sweet passionate
Love to me Tonight.

Don't Let Go of me
Tonight.

I want to cherish this
nite for the rest of
my life.

Yvonne J. Griffin
12/27/02

Author notes

I was listening to Bryan Adams song: Don't Let Go.
and this is what came to mind. I hope that you enjoy it.
Written December 27th, 2002

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  • Forsaken Child
    February 27, 2003
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    Purtyful! This one is full of emotion and yearning.. Its funny how the music you listen to can influence what you write isn't it?
    ~*Forsaken Child*~


  • Lostmemorie
    February 18, 2003
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    dis is beautiful i really liked this one great write


  • liquorice eyes
    February 4, 2003
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    Bryan Adams.... His songs are so beautiful
    I love it when inspiration comes from a song
    Cool poem
    Hattie


  • BleedingWords
    January 29, 2003
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    excellent

    i like this a lot


  • BuRnT iCe
    January 13, 2003
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    neutral

    aww such a romantic passionate poem!
    very beautiful :)


  • Rubee
    December 31, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    a very passionate piece...when it feels so right, you just never want it to end...an absolutely lovely write Yvonne!!!! :)


  • Roseleaf
    December 27, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    M M O*O Yes roll on glad you were listening to Bryan Adams :D
    GreAT piece of that Romatic Love that we all like to get into :D
    I will have to go off and listen to the goon's NOW so I will not get sad or tuck Sandy under Betty and sigh send me a Giant :D
    pauline xox

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