Before I came
Before it happened
Before I met you
I was alright
I wanted to run
I wanted to die
I wanted to cry
but you were there
You held the hand
You said 3 small words
You gave out a kiss
and I was there
They looked happy
They had everything
They had love
I was broken
She held your hand
She heard those words
She recived the kiss
and I was broken
After I came
After it happened
After I met you
I was in pain
Author notes
Okay if you have any idea what this means then comment it. I know of course but I wanna know your thoughts on it. Okay Peace 
OH and I picked number 2. Obviously
the hallow sound of a fallen tear
There I said it. Are you happy now?
Written July 31st, 2005
A contest entry
- losing love(girls only) by Brokenangels.
300 points, ended August 2, 2005, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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sorry just had to bug you about that amy lol well talk to you later dude
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I loved that you had it in four line stanzas but there wasn't any rhyming. It is awesome and I can totally relate to it. Love sucks. Anyways, good luck in the contest!
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since when do you say 'peace'????????? yes amy...it is YOU who has changed.
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You happy now?
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hey amy great poem but your missing something
and it's not horrible like you said it was going to be
Anna
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