He said he loved her
And she believed
For her hope was strong
He said he loved her
As she lay, dying
Her faith lay with him
He said he loved her
As she was tucked
Into the ground below
He said he loved her
And to this day,
He still does.
Author notes
Love never dies. 
Written July 31st, 2005
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LIAR! One of your best poems was the Annie Lennox one, it was my favorite anyways...Loved your comment, I am trying to come back, but it is kind of hard, not much time. Ah well.
I AM BACK IN CONCORD! So excited!! YA!
hehe,
thanks again,
Purplerose
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Thanks for commenting!
Purplerose
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And she's back in business! I hope love never dies. Ture love at least. I could believe it. Of course I am cynical and could agrue that it fades, but unconditional, ture love, yeah, I think I'll agree with you.
This was short and sweet. I've tried to write love poems and they always turn out horrendous. This was nice though. Sad of course but just enough emotion and description to nail the point.
Oh, I think there is a typo in line 7. You wrote "He said HER loved her" and I think you meant "He said HE loved her". I could be wrong. It's happened many times before as you most definately know.
Brilliant, my dear.
Katy -
aww that is so sweet!hmm i hope my bf loves me like that.lol i might just have to go ask him that.great write,hope to read more of your work
xXLauraXX
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Thank you so much, I loved your comment!
Thanks again,
Purplerose
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Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by!
Purpelrose
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BEAUTIFUL! it was so heartfelt yet upsetting! u definitely are right "love never dies", especially when your love passes away!
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I certainly will, thanks for commenting!
Purplerose
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Oh, don't we all! Thanks for commenting!
Purpelrose
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I am very sorry to hear that. My best wishes, and my heart open,
Purplerose
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This gave me chills, I Loved the end! it was great! good job!
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it is beatiful too true
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It was good, Change "He said Her love Her" and it will have a better flow, Check out my Poem "Dying Love" Your poem kinds of reminded me of it.
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Aww! It's so sad! I want someone who'd love me that way! I wish I'll find him! Terrific write! Great work!
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Thank you very much, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks again!
Purpelrose
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Very good, I am in an emotional state right now due to deaths of family members and waiting as a dear friend dies before my eyes...this is great.
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But true.
Thanks for commenting!
Purplerose
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good job that was so sad but at the same time it was so beautiful
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this is so sad and good
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