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Betrayal

betray me - still I come back to you with high hopes

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I hate it when people lie...
Written July 31st, 2005

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  • macandrew
    December 7, 2005
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    Sad and yet filled with hope.

    well written.
    John


  • transcendental baby gold member
    August 6, 2005
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    Yeah, esp. when they keep doing it over and over again ... I wonder if it's really a lie then? Um, something to think about ... great oneliner