Sometimes I wonder
What it was that I did so wrong
I thought I was your princess
As we danced to our favorite song
In so many ways
I wish I hadn't opened my eyes
I wish I hadn't seen
How much you didn't love me; a part of me still kind of dies
Now I don't know if I can be strong
You beat me with words; I just can't speak
It used to kill me that I let you do that to me
But you know you can still beat me down and make we weak
But I don't say a word
I guess I wish it didn't hurt like this
To know you once loved someone who can't love you back
But now I can't love you, and I guess that's what I miss
Daddy dearest; you've got to understand
I don't know who I am anymore
And it makes me sad that you've truly
Slipped from my thoughts as my unwanted tears hit the floor
It's easier to blame it all on you
And sometimes I feel like I wasn't enough
Enough to make you want to love me
And not make me cower beneath your touch
But the sad part is
That I know I don't need you
And I wonder how that makes you feel
But maybe that's why you were so hurtful; you knew
Author notes
Not very good, but..Idk. Yeah.
Written July 31st, 2005
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thankies. i know, i lub me, too. =P j/k
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hey this is good i like it..yea..lol i lub jew
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Ohh..Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I was feeling sorry for myself last night...So I thought I would put it on paper..Err..Or whatever you want to call this! =) Thanks again, and yeah, adjusting to new beginning's can be tough sometimes, but hey, it could be worse? Muahahaha..Now I get to go comment your work. =)
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Thank you. =)
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Encore, Encore!
Wow... I really enjoyed this, it just read so smoothly. I'm not absolutely sure why, but "I guess I wish it didn't hurt like this" is the best line in this poem for me. Sometimes its hard to open your eyes and adjust to a new beginning. I've been there... jesus, who hasnt? Keep up the excellent work... -
This is very good
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