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you're the reason

you're the reason i laugh
you're the reason i cry
you're the reason that i hate myself
you're the reason that i want to die
you're the reason why i keep coming back
you're the reason why i put up with this shit
you're the reason why i went to a shrink
you're the reason why there's a brand new slit on my wrist
no matter how much hate you give me
i'll always come back for more
just like i'll never be good enough for you
your hate will never make this numb body sore

Author notes

just what was on my mind, so i wrote it down.
Written July 31st, 2005

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  • bloodfromsuicide
    October 1, 2005
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    i can relate! well done like 'gigglez' said its deep and you did a really good job! thanks for entering!

  • Gigglez
    July 31, 2005
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    wow that deep you did really good keep it up