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Pour Vou

I had never known.
    (quarter, eight x 4)
that you could make me
    (quarter, eight x 4)
smile with such ease, everyday

I had never known
    (quarter, eight x 4)
nor could I ever
    (quarter, eight x 4)
realize that you could make me feel this way.

But now my heart
does belong
to you
this is true
you have captured it with your beauty
and your smile.
The key
it is yours
to my heart
forever more
and I would not have it any other way

To be continued.

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Written July 30th, 2005

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  • AngelOfAnarchy
    July 30, 2005
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    Oh, how lovely! The emotion was really deep in this, and it was great piece all together. To be continued...dun dun dunn.