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tell me


tell me a tale of sorrow
make me want to weep and cry
grasp at your fingertips
my imagination gone awry

i want to hear tales of pain
the tragedies in real life
i want to be able to feel it all
i want to be able to cry

my heart won't let me see anything
you see, it won't let me live
i just want to hear some sad tales of life
to jump-start it a bit

i want to feel love
i want to feel life
but first of all
i must feel pain and strife

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Written July 30th, 2005

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  • jielle
    September 2, 2005
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    cat... feeling something is up inside of me. i wanna tell u... but i don't know what's wrong. i wrote a new poem. a poem about life, about this world. about the things we can't see.

    <3 mucho

    elle