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The Girl I Love

Everyday she combs her hair, does her make up, and brushes her teeth.
Leaving her fragrance behind while she jets to work.
She's still the girl I love.
Unaware of me near, she falls into her bed- crying, fists of frustration, and anger to herself. She cries for the pain to go away.
She's still the girl I love.
Everyday, she puts up with people whining how their life is horrible.
Not one smile is drawn on her face all day.
She's still the girl I love.
Her birthday is tomorrow and no one here to care.
She curls her hair and dresses up for her 21st year.
She's still the girl I love.
Everyday she looks in the mirror at her "insecurities"...
Thinking of what she could change
But there's no need, she's perfect in my eyes.
She's still the girl I love.
At times, she enjoys and makes the simplest things great.
She laughs and smiles until it starts to hurt
- making her laugh harder.
She is still the girl I love.
Every night, she sleeps soundly with her pillows all around to cuddle.
I catch a glimpse of the glow and peace in her face.
She's still the girl I love.
She tries so hard to make people happy because it brings her joy.
What she doesn't realize is that she doesn't have to do anything, just to get me to smile and appreciate everything of her.
No matter her mood or what she looks like...
She's still beautiful, in and out.
She's still the girl I love.

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My gf posted it for me...thought I might have a chance to win something..*smiles*
Written March 15th, 2005

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  • Billy Badass
    November 21, 2006
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    Great

    It really sounds like love, i really liked it


  • Shantalina
    August 1, 2005
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    This is beautiful. Really heart felt. I am so happy for you that you can feel this way about one person. Thanks for entering my contest, and I wish you the best of luck!

    ~*SHANTALINA MARIE*~