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leave a spot

Leave a spot empty in the garden,
this will leave a place for the fairies to dance.
Leave a spot empty in your mind,
this will allow the fairies to run through out paradise.
In the garden, fairies will spread their dust over the leaves.
If the moonlight hits the garden just right,
you will see a shimmer of light, with a cool nights breeze.
You will see them too, there isn’t very much to do just say please,
they will come out before your eyes and dance their magical dance.

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Written July 30th, 2005

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  • VanillaWhispers
    July 31, 2005
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    Beautiful, I must say.
    Such a goregeous write, oh my, I love it!

  • Lotus Flower
    July 30, 2005
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    So very sweet, this piece is vivid and takes the reader to the garden you speak of. Nice Job!!!


  • FReaKRaveR
    July 30, 2005
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    this is awesomeness great write!

  • OurxBeginning Greeters member
    July 30, 2005
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    Wonderful write, I loved this, excellent job