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i gotta pee!!

sitting here typing
there is a sudden urge
like a water fall...
surging from my vagina...
i have to pee!!

i can't hold it in..
even as i write these words
it's becoming more urgent
i think i need to...
oh wait...
i'm all better...
but the chair seems to be a little wet.

Author notes

yeah i know...it's a stupid poem. but hey, it's something new....haha!!!
Written July 30th, 2005

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  • BabyLove
    July 30, 2005
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    lol thats awesome lol i love it lol gr8 job rofl i love it yet again lol


  • Stac
    July 30, 2005
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    well then...uh..this was a little weird..being your sister....I can say that it was dumb. i mena like, a funny kind of dumb. It's kinda cute though. I haven't heard from you in awhile!
    STAC


  • Sarah957
    July 30, 2005
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    Why didn't you tell me what that was before I sat down, dang it?!?

  • dollar robinson
    July 30, 2005
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    good

    with a honestly, it is not a stupid poem. it has good time and good purpose. no work, however vulgar or brief, is worthless. it is the imagination without pretention. the best effort i have seen all night. except, obviously, for the one i misdiagnosed.