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July 28

It might as have a been a bracelet
They all have such easy access to it.

Do they visit as much as I do?
Or as much as I would like to?

I find it very unlikely
He doesn't know what to do with me.

Engaged you say? And serious relationship.
It has turned platonic
And I have no urge to break it.

Get in and see what it feels like,
That girl was such a dyke
All rudeness aside.

I will be bitter and jaded,
They don't see in, but that's okay.

For now.

Author notes

My day of yesterday, random thoughts all strung together. I know the dyke comment doesn't seem nice, but you would have had to have been there to see I meant no offense, and still don't.
The first 4 lines are about the morgue.
Written July 29th, 2005

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  • SubjectiveObject
    July 30, 2005
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    I love 'all rudeness aside'. That's awesome. Bitter and jaded, eh? Feel not so! This is your time to shine! Beings of the opposite gender are finally realizing what a gorgeous ass-kicker you are! Seize the freakin' day!