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another statistic

I'm sitting here alone
Listening to your voice
On the other end of the phone.
And seeing you kills me.
I won't, I can't, I don't wanna be
Another statistic
The victim of abuse,
Some girl left in the rain
After feeling so much pain.
I'll break your heart and leave mine scarred.
I'll walk all over you for once.
Cuz I'm not gonna be
Just another statistic.
I won't be broken and I won't be hurt.
I'll be strong and make it through
The storm of lies.
No more tears will fall from these eyes.
Cuz I won't, I can't, I don't wanna be
Another statistic
The victim of abuse,
Some girl left in the rain
After feeling so much pain.
I'll break your heart and leave mine scarred.
I'll leave you bloody wounds
Cuz I'm not gonna be
Just another statistic.

Author notes

this was really a song i wrote, but......well. i changed it. i dont know why. but i did.
Written July 29th, 2005

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  • going-under
    August 1, 2005
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    thank you very much.


  • Already Gone
    July 30, 2005
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    wow, awesome song! very deep. your a very good songwriter. i liked it a lot. keep writing!

    <3 always,
    megan