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God's Eyes

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What does God see as He looks down each day
is He very disappointed does His heart sigh
as God searches the world what does He say
are His eyes filled with tears do they cry?

How does He feel to hear His name spoke in vain
to see so many lost souls still living in sin
does he get angry and not care what we do
when will our Lord let peace on earth begin?

Does all God's  disappointment cause Him pain
as He looks down upon the despair and sorrow
does He wonder if it's time to come to earth
will He return and begin a new world tomorrow?

His love continues though many do not believe
we are always surrounded by His eternal love
God's love shines through  all of His pain  
He accepts all to His Kingdom in Heaven above

God does not mind crying and shedding His tears
He sheds all those tears for me and for you
as God looks down upon His creation called Earth
all His wondrous love comes shining through


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Written July 29th, 2005

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  • darlee77
    September 22, 2005
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    Great job

    This poem is very beautiful and thought provoking. It has brought out so many important items. It really does inspire one to move up in the eyes of God. Great job.
  • pozo
    July 30, 2005
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    Good rhyme I loved this piece, it was so spiritual and well written
    All the best,
    God bless,
    Pozo

  • fathom me
    July 30, 2005
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    It's always a pleasure to read what you write. Two people, Mari (MariGoes) and you write what i find uplifting.
    thank you, keep writing
    And I am very well thank you, I was away cause of a big load of study assignments.
    Take care

  • Sandygram silver member
    July 30, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you for the wonderful comment. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Hope all is well with you. God Bless and take care, Sandy

  • fathom me
    July 30, 2005
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    Wow Sandy! This one's just great.. I like it especially because of the flow and how simple words over here communicate what you want to express
    I was not around and have missed your poems.. This one feels real nice.
    Thank you

  • Sandygram silver member
    July 29, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Ah thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I look forward to hearing from you now, you leave such encouraging comments. Thank you again and God Bless you. Drop by anytime. Sandy

    Edited on Jul 29, 3:38 p.m. because ''.

  • Donjo1030
    July 29, 2005
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    excellent

    Wonderful write!!!
    Praise God!!! Yes, how does he feel when he looks down on this world I have always wondered that myself. I know I am ready with my bags packed when he comes back. I really loved this poem. Beautiful message!!!
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