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These people around me

These people around me
I am nothing to them
They dont even look to see
Perhaps no one cares

What is it...
Am I stupid?
I just sit here and think
Maybe I'm just worthless

These people around me
I am nothing to them
They dont even look to see
Perhaps no one gives a damn

I wave to all
And not only do you guys
Walk right on by me
But through me instead

These people around me
I am nothing to them
They dont even look to see
Perhaps Im just an image

You walk by me
I feel a rush of cold air
And icy cold skin
To the very touch

These people around me
I am nothing to them
They dont even look to see
Perhaps it doesn't matter

I reach to hug you
And you walk right
Out of my grasp
Blindly through me like dead night

These people around me
I am nothing to them
They dont even look to see
Perhaps I'm really just not there....





Author notes

This is not one of my better writes so grit your teeth and let me know what you think.
Written July 29th, 2005

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  • scintillescence
    August 3, 2005
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    It may not be one of your better writes, but it didn't have me gritting my teeth! It was really sad, I think everyone feels invisible sometimes. The way you said it made it sound like a dream kind of. Well nice job once again!


  • CursedCookie
    July 31, 2005
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    heh well it wasnt finished yet. I had my idea then had to get up from the comp...eh well maybe ill finish it...

  • OurxBeginning
    July 29, 2005
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    Aaaw sad write, I feel the exact same way..i hope things get better for ya