touching
waiting
i can feel your breath on me
wanting
needing
you can see inside of me
do you think its smart to act that way
and walk right up and abuse me
well did you
i see hell in your eyes
kissing you is a big surprise
watching
feeling
all these things i feel inside
holding
gripping
onto the last drops of my life
do you think its cool to act that way
then love me bad and throw it away
well did you
i hate you
i can't believe you sometimes
your a devil in disguise
taking my soul
then ripping apart
the world i have come to love so much
well i am Michael saviour to all
saving those that need it
retribution has come
for the day of damnation
so now i rip into you
and tear you apart
so you can now lead the life of a sinner
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Written July 29th, 2005
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wonderful!
Wow...absolutely wonderful..full of hatred and emotions like no other..i have to say this is one of your best writes ever!!
Great job!!
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brilltant
Hey, nice poem, i like this alot, so true, I can understand every word you wrote, your a brillant poet, im going to read some more of your work.
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