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Happy

I have felt something so awesome,
Something like a spring blossom.
I have met someone so perfect,
Someone I can protect.
Someone of my own,
That I can fall asleep with without mentally being alone.
I can't believe that I have taken this long to find you,
All along I never had a clue.
I never dreamed you would be my out come.
How could I have been so blind and dumb.
I have this feeling of accomplishment,
And it never took a fee not even a cent.
I am grateful for all I have gotten.
I am at peace not at war being rotten.
I have found someone to make me happy.

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Written July 29th, 2005

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  • darkangel911
    July 30, 2005
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    hey,
    this poem was awsome kk but i kinda dont understand
    but its still koolness kk well write more
    love ya,shaunelle

  • Invisible2YourLove
    July 30, 2005
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    all sweetness and all that mushy stuff.....:)

    awwwwww......is the perfect thing to say in this situation.........lol.....but this was a great poem and i love the way u put all your feelings about bobby in here......i hope you two will have a long and joyus life together.....stay happy!!!!!!!!!........i love you ......
    ~Melinda~

  • Somebodys Hero
    July 30, 2005
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    hey this was good and i hope the best for you and bobby
    Sissy


  • Drunk Off Tears
    July 29, 2005
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    this is really good i really enjoyed reading it kep up the good work
    love,
    Brandie


  • dead soul
    July 29, 2005
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    this is a good write.im half asleep so i aint got much to say but yea...ill see you when you get here today.love you very much.byes
    ~THE UNKNOWN~


  • Forgotten Warrior
    July 29, 2005
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    one of the best poems i have ever read

    Awwwwwwww this is so beautiful lol................im happy for you and bobby and i hope everything worksout just remember dont let the one you love go cuz now i realize i have made the mistake and i know i want be able to take it back and be with the one i love but at least my bestfriend is happy great write
    Much love 4rm the
    Forgotten Warrior
    P.S. you know who I mean by the one I love.

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