Smiling faces, rosy cheeks.
flirty kisses,
vows I do take,
All is bliss, all done in love.
Smelly feet, biting toenails
under the sheets,
smelly farts, gasp for air,
Love enduring.
Hold the purse strings
nice and tight,
never call to say you're late,
bring your friends home,
party all night.
Turn your back when you know he's right,
giggle like a little girl.
Flirt with all the handsome men,
show them all what should be his.
Tease him taunt him
make his life a living hell.
All these things I vow to do,
happy ever-after.
Author notes
This is just for fun and not advice for happy everafter couples.
Written July 28th, 2005
A contest entry
- Positive+ Negative- Emotive (Contest) by thekillerinside.
500 points, ended August 1, 2005, 12 entries
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Very cute I really like the way you think,your allot like me haha funny poem about how it can be after a year or so of bliss.
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heh .. its a good comment on society in general ... thank you for commenting on mine ... (which happened to be about vows too!) ... >>> EM
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-Tony, thanks for your comment, this was just a bit of fun, anyone following this would end up very lonely, this isn't me.
Zonia, thanks for the comment, Husband read it and didn't comment, never mind. You have to have my mentality to get it. lol.
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Great write Ronnie!! good twist on the vows - a very very good insight into what i was looking for!! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Nice piece that truly conveys who you are at this very moment. The whole vow section is interesting to me and reveals a dedication on your part so well done. Tony.
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hahahaha.... Ronnie, you a some kind of a girl. Don't show this to your husband; he might be in shock. Great write.
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