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Empathy

God.  Please take the pain. its tearing me apart.
the Empathy it hurts so bad i feel it in my heart.

i feel what i did to u, its a sharp pain
...the pain is deep in my mind, i can only feel the rain.

All the warmth of happiness, was drained from my soul.
i wonder if what i did was right...i feel the empty hole.

A piece of me was ripped out. There is nothing i can do.
tears start to sting my eyes when i think of you.

Please please understand my decision was already made
whether it was right or not, is unsure I'm afraid...



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There u have it.
Written July 28th, 2005

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  • TorturedLifeandSoul
    August 20, 2005
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    wow i like this a lot. great write.

  • Joao Camilo
    July 28, 2005
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    So, you did not wanted to write, Hat ?


  • Wanted4Murder
    July 28, 2005
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww *deep breath* awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, thats great!

    bff,
    ~mia


  • Gonzo
    July 28, 2005
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    I have nothing to say. It was so wonderful.


  • LostDesires
    July 28, 2005
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    i dont think im finished yet

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