no matter what i do
or what i say
all these problems never go away
i can't seem to control the inevitable
it seems fate has dealt me a bad hand
unlucky in love
unlucky in life
i was thinking of you the other year
i was dreaming of you the other day
the postman delivered your letter today
guess what my problems are here to stay
read this and know i do love you
close your eyes and you will know its true
i told no lies just the truth
but i guess that's not good enough for you
the more i see the less i feel
I'm lying to myself that this is not real
well i guess i don't care anymore
you pushed me too far
as far as i can go
and now I'm ready to snap
all i wanted was one chance
what the hell was i doing
I'm only destined to fail
so yet again i pick up the pieces
the pieces of our lives
I'm the only one that hurts
I'm the only one that loved
why was you so cruel
was it a game you enjoyed
well guess what game over baby
good night Vienna
I've gone to better things
I'm away from you
and guess what my luck has just changed
Author notes
Written July 28th, 2005
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this was an interesting read and I felt a mixture of sadness but joy. It is great how you can write feelings through poetry. It was a fantastic read.
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talented
good work, I was trying my best earlyer, and couldnt send messges it was really anoying, I love your work, your very talented, I cant wait to read more, YOUr on my fav:
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Well my favorite part in this was:
the more i see the less i feel
I'm lying to myself that this is not real
well i guess i don't care anymore
And there was one mistake throughout this whole poem, but I'm sure you can get it. Its not a big deal either way. Keep on writing.
Blessed be,
Lefay -
wow...very interesting...well,I hope you get everything settled...you spoke your mind very clearly...good job,keep it up.~meg
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