I'm a friend to you,
though you mean so much to me,
i just wanna help you through,
if in troble you may be...
you look over me,
hardly even notice that i'm there,
I pray one day you may see,
for you i'd go anywhere...
Just to see you smile,
and a real happy face,
and for it to stay a little while,
kinda like mine after a race...
I'm a friend to you,
and you look over me,
like i wont be here when you're blue,
like i simply wont be...
Hello, I'm not a crystal wall,
i know you can see me here,
while i'm standing, though not tall,
my shoulders slumped in fear...
Fear that when you need me,
i wont be around,
Fear that you wont see me,
lying on the ground...
You're a friend to me,
on the other side of your barrier,
that i wish was just debris.
so maybe you'd be happier...
"Hello... Can you see me, my friend? Am I Still Here?"
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you should know who you are...
Written July 28th, 2005
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aww sucha cute poem for the soul. You a friend to me. Aww you sound like a true friend writing this. Whoever yourwriting should be happy. Yeah friends are good when u ned them but to me the same ones get kinda annoying.
but great poems MY friends are me god and my family true friends forever the others i called associates though they act like true best friends i trust them not because i can lol but great poem
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sometimes when you do a lot of things for your friends and expect them to do things back, you can feel kinda bad. but i really liked this poem, and i thought that you did a great job in showing all of these things. friendship is a great thing, and it's sometimes fun to do things for them.
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This is a sad scenerio you know, when someone offers friendship so willingly and it seems as if the gesture is being overlooked time and again. You have some great rhymes and rhythm in this write and a solid emotion too. Very good write.
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This is so sad.... you want to be a friend and he does not even notice you. Yes, that hurts. You expressed yourself very well in this poem though. I could feel your pain. Well done.
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ha, at risk of sounding like bryan... he said moving to wisconsin's the biggest mistake he ever made. he only loved it to start w/.. yes. it's about justin i miss u too sis! bybye
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it was to justin wasn't it? i miss you guys soooooo much, but at risk of sounding like bryan, i have such a better life here.
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i like this poem alot your on my favorites.
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... u called me hun... FLASHBACK: ...i like your poem...
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*shocked expression* I dont knwo fi tis about me or Brooke.. Either way, Awesome poem hun.
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