wounds are licked gently
scars adorning the wolf sting
hunts of the night, loved
Author notes
Blah, this is the first poem I've written since March, so it's probably not the best, but lol oh well..
Written July 28th, 2005
What did you think
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This was a sweet poem telling how love can hill all. well done on this write. keep up the good work
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Thanks for the comment; I'm trying to make it a habit to return the favor nowadays, being as I'm a bored bored bored little girl
Anyways. I've never been a fan of structured poetry, even just as structured as a rhyme scheme, but this is nice. You managed to pack a whole story into three lines, which I could never do - I'm a rambler by nature!( in case you couldn't tell)
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so short but has so much meaning!!!!!!
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I've never tried to write a sonnet before...not super familiar with the format, and aren't they usually about love and stuff? lol, but I'll look into it a bit
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lovely piece my darling. a haiku... i love structured poems. they make me happy, i love unstructured just as well, but there is just something extra when reading a structured poem. have you ever considered writing a sonnet? i'm sure you'd excell... like usual. congrats on another beautifully written poem dear!
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A fine write. this BG works well too, it does look as if the worf is holding his/ her paw up injured. Very good write. Best wishes and
S... ~genielassie~
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Very nicely done
Good luck in the contest
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Ah this is exellent and very stiff competition! Good luck.
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Even though he gets injured on the hunt he still loves it.
What a great ku Thank you for the entry and the best of
luck to you in the contest. Cindy
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